Creating sequels isn’t easy.
I’m working right now on the second story in the series Tales From Sardis County, and it’s
become more complicated than I intended.
But, that’s okay.
The first Sardis County story, Don’t Come Around Here No More, was pretty simple and
straightforward. I had created a place
in which magic was real, and the use of which caused consequences.
Now, in the second story, Junior’s Farm, I’ve brought a widow and her teen daughter to Sardis
County from the city – the same unnamed city that houses Nicholas Turner and
Justice Security – to start her life over on her grandfather’s farm. Her grandfather was known around Sardis
County as “Junior” Ballantine. Katie
Montgomery grew up on the farm after her parents were killed in an automobile
accident, and wants Carol Grace to grow up learning the good things of life. Katie reconnects with several people that
still remember that she’s Junior’s granddaughter.
Enter Alan Blake.
Alan is a cop from the city. He has
just arrested one of Mickey Giambini’s (the primary bad guy from Jackie Blue – A Justice Security Novel)
top people, and has to go into hiding in order to stay alive long enough to
testify. He also is from Sardis County,
even graduated from high school with Katie.
Few people know of his connection to Sardis County, so he heads
there. Through several coincidences,
Alan hides out on Junior’s Farm as Katie’s hired hand. Sparks fly, and romance between the two
blossoms.
Katie also finds out that she is descended from the Sardis
family. She is shocked by this
development, and the results of this connection are spectacular.
The second story in this series has more character
development, deeper introductions to the people of Sardis County, and sets the
scene for further stories…while the first story was only a walloping adventure,
with only a couple of introductions.
As I said, sequels are difficult. You have to continue a series with character
development, and they have to be characters the reader cares about. The reader has to get to know these
characters in order for the story to be a successful sequel.
Compare the first Justice Security novel, Mama Told Me Not To Come, with its
sequels. Someone Saved My Life Tonight is basically the study of one
uniformed security guard, and Jackie Blue
develops the characters introduced in Mama
even more, though the Justice Security group doesn’t appear until the last
two-thirds of the book. In Jackie Blue, we learn that Joey has
connections in high places, and that he has a huge heart. We learn that Percival “King Louie”
Washington shares that big heart. We
meet two more uniformed “grunts” – Brandon King and Patty Ferguson – and learn about
their characters. The characters of
Justice Security are becoming more human and less cartoony. In Wake
Me Up Before You Go-Go, we learn more of Louie, and why he sometimes speaks
ebonics. We share Misty’s fear and
frustration when she can’t get inside the nightclub in which Joey is trapped
with a madman. We share Jessica’s
desperation as she tries to defend the near-empty Justice Security building
against an assassin with “skills”. We
learn more about Tony Armstrong, the leader of the uniformed “grunts”, and what
he can do. And the Channel 7 reporter,
Miriam Apple, is drawn into the violence that sometimes occurs around the
Justice Security people.
Now, I’m doing it again, with the Tales Of Sardis County. And
I’ll be continuing with Nicholas Turner and Madeline in the upcoming team-up
with Justice Security, Hell’s Bells.
Sequels aren’t easy!
Keep reading!
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